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How to Write a Great Opening Line

By Mikkel Juhl On February 21, 2010 Under General

Do you want to make sure that your entire blog post gets read?

The headline is definitely the most important thing for attracting readers to your blog posts. Definitely the most important factor, when it comes to getting people to read your blog posts, or just considering reading your blog post.

While that isn’t the only thing you want to focus on, when you are getting people to read your blog post. I believe that opening lines is and will always be the second most important  thing, when it comes to this. The opening line’s purpose is to get people to read the next lines.

There are lots of ways you can write a great opening line. I will only demonstrate a few of them, the ones that I find most relevant.

Arouse the Curiosity with a Question

We could start out with a question-type of opening line. The question could be anything, there is different ways of lay out questions for your opening lines.

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1st Type of Question to Ask: Ask a question where everyone would answer ‘yes’.

That’s a technique lots of copywriters have used for a long time and it works. An example of a question could be: “Do you want to be an a-list blogger?”

If the reader answers “yes” to this question, then he is wants to be an a-lister (simply). This means the reader wants to read on, because you have his attention.

With this opening line, you will get the attention of all those bloggers who is wannabe be a-listers. The thing is, your opening line should have much relevance to your headline. thus, this opening line would go very well with the title “how to become an a-list blogger?” – it would be perfect, because the reader can relate to this opening line.

I think you have the general picture of how to make a “yes” question as an opening line.

2nd Type of Question to Ask: Ask a question that makes people wonder what the answer is. Make them interested in reading beyond the opening.

This is yet another technique that people in copywriting have used for quite a long time. A great example of a question would be: ‘How did I Jump From a PR1 to PR8?’

Start the Post With a Quote

A quote can be very effective, no matter where it is on the post. When the right quote it chosen it is deadly powerful in the opening lines. If you use other people’s words you could build some authority or credibility around your blog post.

It is very hard to find a matching quote for a post, especially for an opening line. It’s much easier to build a post around a quote, than to find a quote to fit around your blog post. If you want to have a quote as an opening line, I would go out and find a quote and write a blog post around that specific quote.

Statements

I have “studied” a couple of blogs, which I read daily. Blogs on how to blog and a totally irreverent view on blogging.

When I looked at their opening lines I saw the same thing, over and over again. I am definitely not saying that, that is wrong (though variation is good). I saw statements in almost every single post, and I know that most of my opening lines is statements too.

Statements is very powerful (when used correct) and really lead the reader on and make them read the entire blog post.

What I would do to make the statements much more powerful than some of them are now.

  • Make it sound conversational
  • Deliver it with confidence

That would be the two main things to improve your statement opening lines.

Solve a Problem, By Identifying It

You should begin to see the power and importance of identifying the reader’s need or solve a problem. It is a key for you, if you want to write a killer blog post.

Of course you should never (ever) tell them how they solve the problem in the opening line, but you should tell them, that you will solve the problem later. If they want to solve the problem, then they will most definite read on.

What Was Your Most Effective Opening Line?

I have shared my experience, I’m still on my journey. Everybody is. That means that there is methods that works better, or equal. I really would like you to make a good opening line, the best one from you so far?


25 comments - add yours

Tom | Build That List

February 21, 2010 at 12:29

They are some great things to remember. Anoter good way to grab attention is to go for the shock factor.

My most popular post is: Why You Should Stop Blogging
.-= Tom | Build That List’s last blog ..The Aweber Code….And Why You Need To Promote It! =-.

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Mikkel Juhl

@Tom | Build That List, I wasn’t able to find that particular post, though. Did you do anything special in the opening line?

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Shane Hudson

February 21, 2010 at 13:33

These points are all very useful. I tend to ask a lot of questions and often have quotes but I have noticed many bloggers that do not do this… they should, it works!
.-= Shane Hudson’s last blog ..Interviewed For Raising CEO Kids =-.

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Mikkel Juhl

@Shane Hudson, it sure does. I just find it hard to start out with writing the post and then wind a matching quote.

So I would rather go and find a quote and build my post around that quote.
.-= Mikkel Juhl’s last blog ..How to Write a Great Opening Line =-.

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Liane

February 21, 2010 at 20:30

My own discovery-

starting with stories. They connect to an emotional level. I learned it from copywriters. Worked like magic :D
.-= Liane’s last blog ..A Creative Lesson From Steve Jobs =-.

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Mikkel Juhl

@Liane, Yeah. I have heard that too, but I am not the best story teller, so I haven’t tried this technique!

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King Sidharth

February 21, 2010 at 21:14

Wow! I was really in need of this. This makes me want to go back and see what worked with most awesome posts on my Blog. Thanks !
.-= King Sidharth’s last blog ..A How-to on Hardcore Motivation =-.

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Mikkel Juhl

@King Sidharth, cool! Glad to help you out! Take it easy!
.-= Mikkel Juhl’s last blog ..How to Write a Great Opening Line =-.

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Michelle Mangen

February 21, 2010 at 21:24

Mikkel:

Enjoyed reading the post. Headlines/titles are something I still struggle with from time to time, though I am getting better at it.

One of my most popular headlines was the “Why I think the new Twitter RT feature sucks!”

I’ll get better and better at it as I move through my blogging journey.
.-= Michelle Mangen’s last blog ..Changing the Lives of Children with just two clicks! =-.

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Mikkel Juhl

@Michelle Mangen, cool!

Yeah it takes time and experience to learn how to write good headlines and it takes time to write good opening lines, as well.

But you have to try, otherwise you are not going to improve.

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Brendan Wenzel

February 21, 2010 at 21:24

Good stuff Mikkel. I’ll be sure to use this advice on my next post.
.-= Brendan Wenzel’s last blog ..By: Twitter Trackbacks for Branding Yourself, Online Branding, Human Branding [brendanwenzel.net] on Topsy.com =-.

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Mikkel Juhl

@Brendan Wenzel, nice! I hope you can see a difference or at least try to build up some experience around this and then improve overtime. It really is important.
.-= Mikkel Juhl’s last blog ..How to Write a Great Opening Line =-.

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Julius Kuhn-Regnier

February 21, 2010 at 22:30

awesome tips Mikkel. I love quotes but I don’t use them often enough.
Stories are another great opener for an article. Like Liane said they connect to the reader on an emotional level. I am currently working on my story telling skills :P Will see how it goes.
.-= Julius Kuhn-Regnier’s last blog ..How to Make a Great First Impression Through Guest Posts =-.

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Mikkel Juhl

Quotes are powerful. Stories are powerful.

But they are only powerful when they are used correctly. And it takes time to make them work correctly.

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Alex

February 22, 2010 at 01:20

Excellent points. Keeping these points close by will help me generate posts and titles. Appreciate the great article!
.-= Alex’s last blog ..The Importance of Research, 3 Key Rules =-.

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Mikkel Juhl

Glad I can help, practise is good.

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Ed

February 22, 2010 at 01:22

sweet tips man going to leave this page open so i will not forget it for my next post. also maybe starting it off with an action might be good
.-= Ed’s last blog ..Google Wave Contest =-.

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Mikkel Juhl

Yeah action. The first couple of times will be hard for opening lines, but as the time move on, it will get easier.

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Henrik Blunck

February 22, 2010 at 01:52

You are quite right. Grabbing people’s attention was also the subject of my last article, and combining many little words of wisdom from many sources can indeed make a very good end-result.

Thanks for sharing. :-)
.-= Henrik Blunck’s last blog ..You Want Attention — Here’s How to Get it! =-.

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Mikkel Juhl

Indeed correct.

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Dave Felton

February 22, 2010 at 14:23

Thanks for a great article.

I tend to just dive into what I want to say, but asking a question to which the answer is “yes” seems beautiful. :)

Thanks again.
Dave (still learning to blog)
.-= Dave Felton’s last blog ..And some days you lose… =-.

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Walter

February 23, 2010 at 08:03

Questions are a very powerful start. I do this on my blog and it works very well. The quote however I prefer to put at the end. I believe this it will speak to the readers long after they read the article. :-)

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Mikkel Juhl

@Walter, yeah. In the end, but that wouldn’t attract the readers, as they probably don’t know about the quote.

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